Gods, demigods the Firstborn of the title , cursed warrior magicians, personifie Wonderful setting, bloat and pacing issues: First of all, picking up the book after 7 months away from the series felt good. Gods, demigods the Firstborn of the title , cursed warrior magicians, personified natural forces taking the guise of cats and foxes, bard-born, seer-born, healer-born, regular mortals who are just trying to live their lives.
This setting breathes magic and mystery. I love it so much. The characters are strong. They feel like real people, their motivations are carefully thought out, their reactions feel natural.
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There are characters who throughout the series have hinted at ancient secrets, and now those secrets are out in the open and coming to call. There are characters whose growth has been a slow roll over 15 books and it is all paying off. But this book, like much of the rest of the series, suffers from two main flaws: bloat and pacing. They are related, but separate.
West has added too many characters, too many threads to follow, too many voices trying to chime in and she struggles to make them all relevant. We are faced with three somewhat different, though essentially similar, old plotting clever men Jarven, Haval, and Hectore who get far too much 'page time', often bantering with each other. Meanwhile two powerful characters who have been essential from the beginning of the series Avandar and Kallandras are basically invisible and thrown in as after thoughts when used at all, despite being present for most of the scenes.
West has grown her cast too large and was not able to effectively wield them all. The book starts off well enough, but often repeats itself. Characters will have the same or similar thoughts over and over. But she's not!
But she sort of is! Chapters go by where very little happens. Then suddenly crazy important plot stuff. Then nothing for a long time. Then a chapter filled with tertiary characters talking about why they didn't kill each other decades ago. Then crazy plot stuff! Then a long explanation of why the main character feels guilty, like we didn't already realize that her sense of responsibility started in her childhood.
Also there were a few chapters where multiple characters decided to start using the phrase 'for the nonce' for some reason, and then they stopped again. These flaws come down to the same issue: Lack of a good editor.
West has repeatedly stated that her editor lets her tell the story she wants. I'm sorry, but the editor is doing her a huge disservice. It's clear West has amazing ability to create worlds, characters and tell an interesting story that leaves you wanting to continue.
But she wanders, she gets lost, she tells the same events from multiple POVs, she repeats herself. And I get it, I'm betting most authors do this.
But it's the editor's job to fix this. To look at the book and say 'Hey, why is everyone saying 'for the nonce' all of a sudden? But lack of effective editing kept it from being so. If I was given the role of fixing it, I would turn it from 16 books to That said, I will keep reading. I really want to know how the story ends, how the characters end up, how the world ends up.
Feb 21, T. Fox rated it it was amazing Shelves: fantasy , favorites , magic-fae. I almost wish that I had reread at least the last couple of books in this series before I read this as it took me a bit to sink back into all the characters and this world, especially since it has been a while since Oracle. I did hit a couple of places with regards to Jarven, Haval and Hectore that felt repetitive or redundant, making those portions of this book drag, especially when I wanted to get back to what was going on with Carver I almost wish that I had reread at least the last couple of books in this series before I read this as it took me a bit to sink back into all the characters and this world, especially since it has been a while since Oracle.
I did hit a couple of places with regards to Jarven, Haval and Hectore that felt repetitive or redundant, making those portions of this book drag, especially when I wanted to get back to what was going on with Carver and Ellerson. In the grand scheme of things, those are minor gripes as this was supposed to be the last book in the series, but in classic MS tradition, one book became two, which means we get another book.
Much like Oracle, though, this book does more to fill in blank areas that are needed before we can get to that last book. Lack of growth and the few times of feeling that bit of redundancy aside, this book felt like a whole lot happened. Including my prediction that I was definitely going to be needing lots of tissues by the time this is all said and done. The last book is due out this June, so only a tiny bit of patience is required. Mar 05, Lynee rated it it was ok. Probably thousands of times, and that gets old quickly. Also, there are pages and pages that rehash her early life.
Every book is done that to some extent, but it seems like this book moves far too slowly because of it. Add in quite a few new characters of dubious intent, and I was just praying for the book to be over. Jun 04, Mary B. Grove rated it it was amazing. I really really liked this one Unlike the last couple of books in this series, there were no unexpected character shifts or oddly disappointing plot point resolutions.
Instead, everyone was purely themselves and the story was grounded in what came before. Did it provide any sense of closure? Instead, it gave us, in vignettes large and small, a real sense of who several of the characters are at this point in their lives and stories. It I really really liked this one Unlike the last couple of books in this series, there were no unexpected character shifts or oddly disappointing plot point resolutions.
It also shows with exquisite poignancy how much each person in the den will have to give to the war, and how much more Jewel will have to surrender before she can lead it. Lovely, grounded writing and surety regained. Feb 22, Marlie rated it really liked it. This one I think started as a trilogy?
A lot of little pieces have come together in this story. We find out a lot on the backstory of the cats, Evayne, and her first born companions. Apr 22, Kathryn Baron rated it liked it Recommends it for: Fans of the series. Shelves: I have been impatiently waiting for this book. And there is a lot to like about it, but not as much as I was hoping for. Mostly because dispite the length not much really happens. This was meant to be the conclusion of the series, and it got big enough to split in two. So most of it is more setup. Which feels a bit like a bad fix-it fanfic with better writing.
The main payoff will be in the next volume. Depending on how hard that one breaks my he I have been impatiently waiting for this book. Depending on how hard that one breaks my heart, I may come to love this one too. Jun 14, Brent Drake rated it it was amazing. The story gets better with each book I think my header says it.
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Mar 10, Mary F. Coull rated it liked it. Drawn out too long As much as I love this series, I get the feeling that it's just going on and on and on without arriving at a solution. I don't know if the author is trying it out so she can sell more books or what but I know that it's disappointing. Feb 20, Lena rated it liked it Shelves: kick-ass-heroines , fantasy. I still want to read the series end, but these recent books seem to drag out the story unnecessarily past the point where i just want to get to the finale already: jewel is still avoiding her fate like always.
Jan 05, Breane Ross rated it really liked it. Received an arc from netgalley. First book in this series that I have read and it was great! I need to get the first 6. Definitely recommend this book! Jun 04, Ruth DeLoor rated it did not like it. Review by winged cats Boring Stupid My review endless. Maybe a total of 20 written pages that advanced the plot. Get I bought it. Jun 27, Scott Wozniak rated it really liked it. Setting up the big ending to a long series which is embedded in an even bigger set of series.
Feb 21, Sue Dixon rated it it was amazing. S presidents when it was discovered that more than half were firstborn, the rest were middle and four were lastborn. After investigating the birth order of the U.
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S presidents, important leaders were also looked at and showed the same outcome; a large number of every type of leader was firstborn rather than last. Birth order, and the role of the firstborn, can become complicated in non-nuclear families , with situations such as parents of one child or set of children separating from each other and entering relationships with other people, and then having children with their new partners.
In such instances, the first child born in the new relationship may be considered the firstborn for that couple, even though it may not be the first child born to either partner in the couple.
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